Viajando en un pequeño barco la joven de nuestra historia estaba, guiada por los peces y las nubes hasta la tierra soñada. Una vez en la orilla, sus pies buscaban la estabilidad de la tierra y el calor producido por la mirada del Sol. Los ojos claros y sinceros de nuestra protagonista miraban al cielo y a la naturaleza que se extendía a su alrededor. Sin miedo, sin dudas, cogió su pequeño diario y se adentro en el gran bosque despidiéndose de los peces. Contemplando a todos los seres de allí donde estaba y dibujándolos en su pequeño diario, la chica sonreía y se colocaba su sombrero. La tranquilidad, el amor, la bondad se respiraba en ese ambiente, las plantas cantaban melodías hermosas y los animales seguían a las mariposas en un baile alegre. El amor había llegado en forma coloreada, con su diario la chica pintaba armonías, historias hermosas, animales fantásticos, y aventuras de verano. Su belleza y su corazón la convertían en la viajera más cercana , en la viajera más sincera.
"L'amor natural"
Traveling in a small boat the young of our history was guided by the fish and the clouds to the dream land. Once on the shore, his feet looking for the stability of the Earth and the heat produced by the eye of the Sun. Clear and honest eyes of our protagonist looked to the sky and nature that extended to her around. Without fear, without a doubt, took her small diary and is inside in the great forest, saying goodbye to the fish. Contemplating all beings there where I was and drawing in her small diary, the girl smiled and placed his hat. Peace, love, kindness they breathed in that environment, plant sang beautiful melodies and the animals remained butterflies in a joyful dance. Love had arrived in coloured form, with his journal the girl painted harmonies, beautiful stories, fantastic animals, and summer adventures. Your beauty and your heart became it the nearest traveler, in the most sincere traveller.
I think this piece is done beautifully. There is a simplicity to it that draws the viewer in. The drawing is both stylistic and realistic at the same time which can be hard to pull off. You did an amazing job with the crosshatching and shading. The line work is a little rough but that only adds to the beauty of this piece. I think the use of color is very nicely done. You stuck with one color and just changed the tone and shade of it throughout the piece and the color you chose definitely suits the drawing. It's almost like a pen sketch, but it's made into a beautiful drawing. I like how the person in the portrait is staring off to the side and smiling at something instead of looking directly at the viewer. It adds some mystery to the piece, and makes you ask what is she looking at that's making her smile? This was definitely a job well done and I wouldn't change a thing about this piece.
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