Las luces aparecieron en la sala y con ellas una figura alta y delgada, al principio todo hacia presagiar que un ángel había caído del cielo a la tierra, poco a poco se descubrió entre tanta luz a una chica alta y desgarbada, de aspecto sincero y majestuoso. Los corazones de los allí presentes se congelaron, y se contagiaron de aquella belleza, su mirada tan intensa, sus pasos eran seguros y rápidos. Los flashs invadían cada parte del cuerpo de esta chica, los gritos hervían de un nerviosismo el ambiente. Pocos sabían que ocurría, hasta percatarse de esa figura, y quedarse hipnotizados. Nadie después de aquel día comprendió que ocurrió, nadie sabía si realmente existía aquella figura de hermosura indiscutible y de sonrisa nerviosa. A veces la oscuridad nos ciega, el pasado nos tortura, pero siempre tenemos luz en nuestro interior, luz con la que brillar y ser recordados.
1974 - KMoss
Lights appeared in the room and with them a figure tall and thin, all initially to presage that an angel had fallen from heaven to the Earth, little by little he discovered among so much light to a high and ungainly, girl with a sincere and majestic look. The hearts of the present there were frozen, and they caught this beauty, his intense gaze, his steps were fast and safe. The NewsFlashes invaded every part of the body of this girl, the cries of a nervousness boiled the environment. Few knew it was happening, until notice of that figure and be hypnotized. No one after that day understood that happened, no one knew whether there was really that figure of unquestionable beauty and nervous smile. The darkness sometimes blinds us, the past us torture, but we always have light in our interior light to shine and be remembered.
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Antonella
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